A2 EYV Rework tutor comments.

Simon my tutor has just let me have his brief comment on the rework of assignment 2.

 

ā€œThe re-wroked Assign 2 also improves on the original set. You place the objects in the frame in a similar way to give a cohesiveness to the set and using colour to link the rubbish to the background scene is effective.he re-wroked Assign 2 also improves on the original set. You place the objects in the frame in a similar way to give a cohesiveness to the set and using colour to link the rubbish to the background scene is effective.ā€

 

Overall Iā€™m happy with Simons comment and the assignment overall I have been able to put across what I wanted to portray ā€“ although perhaps I can be better in illustrating my developmental steps in future assignment and courses.