The previous post was submitted to my tutor on the 6th November without much confidence in it content, these are my thoughts as why I have little confidence. I will be not moving forward on the course until I get feedback from Andrew.
Demonstration of subject-based knowledge and understanding.
While I am happy with parts of the essay, I’m unsure of what I should be talking about and also am I talking about the right films. I am satisfied with the idea I have presented, but they are not expressed in the best way. I don’t think there is much difference in the essay’s structure to assignment 1; which is not ideal
Demonstration of research skill
This area is weak – while following on from assignment 2 I invested in several books I was overwhelmed with the amount of information and also on which information to use. I have found myself falling back to internet research. This needs to be improved and discussed with my tutor.
Demonstration of critical and Evaluation skills
Again relating back to the first point and assignment one this is a little thin – idea are not fully expended.
Communication
This a think needs work, but I believe that it is better than assignment 1.