Demonstration of technical and visual skills
On a technical side the image is little different from the initial draft sent to my, tutor is well lit and focus.
Quality of the outcome
By adding the ID style picture and limiting the figures I am more pleased with the outcome, there is more or a feeling of self-portraiture and identity. I feel that there is also some imbiguity to the figures to allow the viewer to draw their own conclusions to the symbolism
Demonstration of creativity
Narrative photography has been a struggle for me, not a natural fit you may say, however, I think this re-worked image has built upon my most successful image from this course
Context
This units title “Context and Narrative” tell us what we should be looking for in our photography. We need to search our feeling and our surround at expressing ourselves. I find this very difficult as am a solitary person and very private – building this image is very much outside of my comfort zone. However, by adding my own image to the final picture I am more comfortable with it and I feel that I have been able to show a little bit of how I see myself.